The Official Writing Challenge
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perfect :-)
Beautiful, creative, and well written. I would suggest that you use spacing between paragraphs to make your work easier to read. Thanks for sharing your unique take on the subject.
Beautiful and very well written. I loved how you told your story through the eyes of God. Thank you for sharing.
This is a brilliant piece. I really liked how you made God and Jesus so real. It's unlike anything I've ever read. I really enjoyed it. Before you hit the submit button hit preview and you'll be able to see what your story will look like when others read it You did a great job. Congratulations for placing 6th in level two. (The highest rankings are on the message boards late Thurs. evenings EST)
I like how you have expressed God's love and trust in us, and how we can so easily disappoint him. Very descriptive.