The Official Writing Challenge
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I love how you kept the moon theme throughout and brought up many different topics from the Bible! Well thought out and very enjoyable!
01/15/11
I enjoyed how you wove the topic through the story of Peter and tied it together so nicely with the forgiveness theme. Good job!
01/16/11
Good flow, easy to read and a wonderful message throughout. Good job.
01/16/11
A rough and tumble man for sure, but you sure nailed him and did it very well! Good job!!!
I truly enjoyed this poem. It covered the events from the Bible in such away that even a child could understand. Beautifully written and thank you for sharing.
This is a really beautiful piece. You touched my heart many times.

A little red ink - make sure you use an apostrophe and an s when making a word possessive.

You did a beautiful job. Congratulations for placing 7th in level two!