The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a beautiful story. The more I read this week the more I've realized that many of us have had a bad touch encounter to write about. That fact in itself is sad. Your story showed the bad touch but it also showed hope and the grace of God. Well-done.
08/16/10
I love the progression of this story. Lots there so little space. Your MC is wonderful. Check for passive tenses in your story - getting rid of it will tighten the story even more. Great work!
08/16/10
You did a good job with this painfilled story. When we allow God to touch our lives, miracles happen.
08/19/10
Woohoo! You placed! Great work on this one.