The Official Writing Challenge
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10/08/09

Good contrasts! One life beginning...another closing. Well written and an enjoyable read.

10/10/09
Very nice! Excellent imagery in the two contrasting vignettes.

There's a class on poetry currently running in the Writing Forum of the message boards. We'd really welcome input from a gifted poet such as yourself!