The Official Writing Challenge
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07/18/05
Charming poem! You truely capture the out of doors and God's beauty found there! Lovely pictures of nature. I Loved It!
07/20/05
I sensed God's continueing prescense in all creation. Nicely done. God bless ya, littlelight
07/20/05
There is a lovely flow to this poem as you created the images of outdoor experiences. You must have enjoyed writing this. Thanks for sharing.
07/22/05
Great images.
07/24/05
Interesting poem, full of images. Work on beat and measure.
07/25/05
I like the contrast you draw between camping and every day life.