The Official Writing Challenge
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07/19/05
Very cute and well written story! I loved your message! "So True"
07/19/05
Your article teaches us to keep our eyes on the real "value" in our life, Christ. Thanks for sharing.
07/20/05
Amen. Nicely written.
God bless ya, littlelight
07/20/05
I appreciated this story. It shows that material things or luxuries are not what brings happiness, but a right relationship with God and other people.
07/20/05
We have so many lessons to learn and your story does just that - teaches us a few. We learn what it is to have God in our hearts so we can show love to a neighbour (someone in need), as well as not judging others by what they have or lack. Enjoyed your article.
07/21/05
A very nice story :)
Great story! I loved the luxury camping v. rustic camping and how in the end you had much in common. Fun.
07/24/05
Great story - thanks.
Nice Job..I enjoyed it from the title to the end. A winner in my book.
07/25/05
Well told story. Consistent voice. Even better read if you gave each character’s dialogue a line of its own.