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John 15:9 As the Father has loved me, so have I loved you. Abide in my love.

"What rapture! What joy! We’ve achieved a connection!"
This is a sweet piece of writing. It is all so true. Good job.
Really enjoyed the lyrical flow!
Really nice work. The rhythmic repetition of phrases as the cycle repeats on the next level makes this piece poetic.
I am very surprised that I am the first to comment on this excellent read! What a concept - how we continue throughout infancy to adulthood and then start again - the ultimate recycling! This is so very well written - you said in few words what most would take paragraphs to explain. I felt each age and grew with you. Thank you!
Yeeks! Shows I didn't go far enough down to read the other comments! Apologies to all who wrote...

Again - I reiterate: LOVED IT!!
I really enjoyed the rythm of this. You really captured the circle of life and how important that connection is.
I like this tale that goes around full circle. Great