The Official Writing Challenge
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AMEN!

John 15:9 As the Father has loved me, so have I loved you. Abide in my love.

"What rapture! What joy! We’ve achieved a connection!"
This is a sweet piece of writing. It is all so true. Good job.
Really enjoyed the lyrical flow!
08/15/08
Really nice work. The rhythmic repetition of phrases as the cycle repeats on the next level makes this piece poetic.
I am very surprised that I am the first to comment on this excellent read! What a concept - how we continue throughout infancy to adulthood and then start again - the ultimate recycling! This is so very well written - you said in few words what most would take paragraphs to explain. I felt each age and grew with you. Thank you!
Yeeks! Shows I didn't go far enough down to read the other comments! Apologies to all who wrote...

Again - I reiterate: LOVED IT!!
08/19/08
I really enjoyed the rythm of this. You really captured the circle of life and how important that connection is.
08/20/08
I like this tale that goes around full circle. Great