The Official Writing Challenge
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09/14/06
Ah! Good food for thought there at the end. Good analogy. You probably could even expand this into a bigger piece. I wasn't sure at first where mother's propensity for collecting s & p shakers was going, but it was soon clear. You may want to break up that big paragraph into a couple smaller ones. Thank you for the fine imagery and useful life lesson.
09/15/06
Great lesson, with some wonderful examples. Even had a chuckle here and there! Thanks for sharing this important lesson!