The Official Writing Challenge
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Powerful. I'm glad you were reunited with your mother.

Thank you for sharing. It gives hope to other children who have been abducted.
09/08/06
What a story. To be abducted and not even know it. This was quite interesting.
09/08/06
WOW! What an awesome testimony. I had no clue where this was going. Great job! This story still leaves me with some unanswered questions, but that could have been your intention. This is really great!
09/18/06
Wow, this has all the makings of an excellent piece - especially the suspense and mystery. A couple places tell instead of show and it would be better (IMHO) to delete the "already"s. I was drawn into the story immediately. Intense, gripping writing.