The Official Writing Challenge
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We never know where or how God will meet us, and take care of the ache in our heart. This is very moving. It kept me reading to the last word.

Thank you and keep writing.
09/08/06
What a moving story. Hope and Faith strengthen each other and your title has given more meaning to your entry.
09/08/06
I agree that the title gave your story even more depth. Awesome job. Great writing! Very captivating and moving.
09/08/06
What a lovely, tender story. Reminds me of a scripture in Isaiah where He says He leads the blind in a way they know not. Surely Stephen was led to the river for a reason he didn't know, but God did. Great stoy, Great job
09/12/06
Your ending is a "Wow."
The story is deeply affecting and told with great heart. Some of the sentance structure needs some polish, and the ending felt a little too easy for my own tastes, but was nicely handled. Keep writing and God bless. xx