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04/17/06
I love your last sentence, with the prepostitions suggesting being surrounded by Christ. The "flight" is a good metaphor. Be careful of "could of" and "should of"--they should be "could have" and "should have." Nice devotional--I can see this expanded into a sermon.
04/18/06
A very touching devotional...and reads like a soothing salve for the one whose life is nearing the finish line. Brings joy to the heart and peace to the soul. Nicely done.