The Official Writing Challenge
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02/23/06
Sobering reminder Connie. I hope that God will bring people to this message who most need to know the warmth of God's love for the first time.

My only suggestion for improvement would be to use an example from your own experience, rather than the Pastor's secondhand one. Either that, or relate the story without saying, "Our pastor told us a little story ..." because the reader then thinks that the Pastor is the clever story teller, not the actual person who wrote the piece.

Other than that, keep writing and honing your skill. I know you are doing it for God's glory, and I know He will always bless those who serve Him.

With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)