The Official Writing Challenge
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02/11/16
Loved the title - and how you kept the story flowing so well.
Quite the cultural bridge that Jim crossed to communicate the gospel - when he might have otherwise tried to 'worm' his way out of the challenge!!! Good work.
02/15/16
Great memory! Thanks for sharing.
02/17/16
Being a former missionary, I loved this story. My red ink is that you need to make use of commas. There were some places where it all ran together. Some commas separating ideas would have helped.
02/17/16
Great job!

Blessings~
The title grabbed my attention; the story kept it. I wasn't disappointed.

Nice.
02/18/16
I think your title summed up your story nicely. It is interesting to find out what other cultures find tasty, like cockroaches, grasshoppers, etc.
02/18/16
Congratulations on your 2nd Place finish! I loved the title and the story.
02/18/16
Alma, Congratulations on your second place finish in the beginner category.
Chocolate tastes good on just about everything. If it meant spreading the gospel, it was well worth the effort.
02/18/16
Congrats!
Blessings~
02/18/16
Congratulations, Alma, on your 2nd place in the Beginners Category. This missionary story was memorable.