The Official Writing Challenge
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This is so poetic. Good job. Keep writing.
I enjoyed this. I think you make some great points. Usually when an author speaks directly to the reader, it can turn me off as being preachy. I didn't get that feeling with your piece though. I like the way you tackled the topic and you make some good points to make the reader stop and think.
There is a refreshing earnestness in your comments and you kept the tie-in to the topic central in a creative way. Well done.