The Official Writing Challenge
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11/14/07
I love your title. You've done really well writing this story and made it very interesting for a reader. It's sad sometimes the things that go on in the churches. Your ending analysis is very good. Thanks for telling this story!
11/14/07
Wow, very powerful last line. Thought provoking and convicting. Your title caught my attention and drew me in. This wonderful entry did not disappoint. Blessings~
There are so many good things about this. Great title, great story and fantastic last line. Thankyou very much for sharing it.