The Official Writing Challenge
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09/17/06
YOur experience of dreaming bigger than life and being disappointed is familiar to me. Praise God for your maturity to let Him help you be and do what will help others. Keep up the writing too. Maybe some more paragraphs would make it easier to read. God bless.
09/17/06
Interesting comments, and I can also identify with someone who dreams big. I agree that splitting this into paragraphs might make it easier to read.
09/19/06
Alice in Wonderland was a great way to introduce us to the point of your challenge entry. Hint: get straight into it instead of saying 'When I saw this weeks challenge topic...'
I felt sad for the little girl you were and how you were treated. This was a emotional story.