The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow, I get the feeling I'm in the presence of a profoundly creative mind here! It took me a while to get into the piece because of the ragged meter, but it almost didn't matter after awhile because you have a powerful message and depth of expression.
I liked your testimony, "I hunger for lifeís thunder and rain."
I have no doubt you'll find your stride with whatever the meter issues are. I simply revel in your originality and hope to read more, more!
06/06/06
Excellent take on the topic. Convicting, interesting piece. Keep honing your skills. Great work!