The Official Writing Challenge
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What an excellent story! I enjoyed listening to the observer's voice. And you tied in the final analogy in a smooth motion let the reader feel continuity. Just a great read!
03/04/05
What a sweet story! I loved it from beginning to end. You did a very nice job picturing how we think we help God. What an interesting glimpse into our childlike relationship to God.
You drew me in the kitchen with Allie and Poppa. I felt as if I was right there with them. Great job and I loved the ending! This is a keeper! Good job!