The Official Writing Challenge
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02/28/05
I liked this - especially the last paragraph.
I would have liked to have seen some space between paragraphs to make the reading easier. Because I didn't want to miss a word or thought here. You managed to get several stories to illustrate your point and still kept it simple. But I think my favorite line was where you said you understood the willing part but it was the motivation that could surprise us! Or something like that! Interesting read
Great piece! This is so thought-provoking that I think you could have a great opportunity to publish it one day. It does need a little polishing. A tweak here and there. Please add it to your writing portfolio. I would love to see this in a magazine article one day. Again, great job!