The Official Writing Challenge
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Good, but it sounded like a sermon.
Sermon? Perhaps but all good stories has one there somewhere! But what I liked about the take on this one was that you didn't just say, "this is what you do to be willing like forgive someone" but that you took it further, to forgive totally without malice etc. Now that is the true heart of willingness and what makes it so difficult.
03/07/05
You have put it well. It's not what you can do, but what you are willing to do, and what you are willing to do to make your Lord smile. That is enough.