The Official Writing Challenge
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I think that first paragraph could have gone towards the end. The story can start this piece, it lays the entire foundation. But man oh man, what a sad story! What trauma for a little boy! But the child did learn about loyalty and love and the consequences of disobeying too. The dog who loved too much. It's doesn't slip me that dog spelled backwards is God...
03/07/05
This is such a beautiful story and very well written. It was sad that King died for you; you tied in very nicely our Saviour's death for us.