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01/23/15
This is well expressed, though could I suggest you list your "Have the..." segments in point form - to help slower readers like me to realise that they are not questions but rather a plan of attack on community needs.
If this entry is your personal response to those needs, you'll need to gather other like-minded people around you to generate more momentum and to prevent the onset of cynicism at one extreme and belligerence at the other.
God bless.
01/24/15
Powerfully written!
So much truth in this piece, excellent job.

God bless~
I would guess your mind was racing as you wrote this, not because it was late but because this has been on your mind for some time.

In part we as a nation of church going people have brought it on ourselves. We aren't a church going nation anymore but we go the our government for out help.

What you are writing should be a wake-up call to us all. Keep at it.
01/29/15
Congratulations John

well done

God bless~
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