The Official Writing Challenge
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I liked this story very much. Although, I think that you could leave the two sentences off and it would not do it any harm. On the contrary, I think that it would even make it better. Thanks for the great story!
I'm sorry, In the above sentence, I met to say the "last" two sentences and I just said the two sentences instead.
11/17/05
I agree with the last two sentences did not need to be there. This is a truthful story. To many people go to different things to feel pretty. JESUS was the answer.. Great story.
11/17/05
Sometimes it takes a lifetime of hurt to get to a life of hope in Christ. Thanks for sharing.