The Official Writing Challenge
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You tackle a pertinent issue very well here. The transition from He (the husband asleep) to He (God's thoughts) was a little confusing in the first instance. The Scripture choice (Ps 139) is my favourite and very precious -I think there's a protocol for referencing you might want to check. I wonder if you have written the rest of this yet? It would be worth the effort - Deni