The Official Writing Challenge
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09/05/13
Well thank you for your testimony. Praise the Lord for being there for you and guiding you through life.

I was so sorry to hear of "people setting you up" but you overcame with the strength of the Lord who held you up!

I wish you all the best in college. God bless you~
This is a compelling read. I can feel the passion and even a sense of adventure in your words.

You have quite a few little errors like capitalizing random words and using the wrong verb tense. I'm not sure if this is a real testimony or if the errors are part of the MC 's voice. Either way, finding a good proofreader will make your writing even stronger.

I really enjoyed the pictures you painted for me God does love us so much and you showed by your words that so much can be done in his name if we can just trust and believe. That's a beautiful message. Good job.