The Official Writing Challenge
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05/24/12
Very nicely done. This was a powerful and compelling story...and delivered an important message which transcends time.

I enjoyed the dialogue, and the descriptive words in declaration and love to our Lord.

A very good job with this piece, and a beautiful way of bringing the topic to the forum.

God Bless~
This is A powerful story. I liked the courage of the MC, I'd suggest you put questions or thoughts in italics or quotation my his to help the reader know who is speaking.
Overall you did A spectacular job. You were on topic and your message is one we all need from time to time.
05/26/12
Concise, hard-hitting, & poignant.

Well done.
05/30/12
Compelling and nice job sticking to the theme.

We all need to brush up on our punctuation, etc. That's my only stumble on this one.

Good job!