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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Risk (05/17/12)

TITLE: Guillotine
By brian ward
05/19/12


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How is your faith Jonas? Do you recognize Christ as your savior?
Yes I do proclaimed the spirited young man. Why, by what means are
you empowered to deny me? For am I not your king? Sir, you may be
ruler of this land, but my king (ha). My king sits upon a throne in the
heavens.

Jonas of Palestine sits amongst those whom believes in Christ
Jesus. He sits on trial today for betraying the kingship of the royal
seal. He hath declared that Christ is his king and the one messiah.

What say you sir of this? Do you deny the rule of antichrist?
Art thou admired within your faith? If deemed guilty in this court
capital punishment will be sought.

Let there be no mistake. I Jonas of Palestine do hereby
acknowledge your rule. For it has been written. Ye shall have reign
for a season amongst the earth. For I say unto you by the grace of God
and the blood of the lamb I am free of bondage. I am not feared.
For by his name I am saved. If thou must punish me hasten quickly.
I am a Christian by birth right and will not serve you! All Christianís
arise for this is your time. Proclaim your faith and be whole.

The holy words of Christ remain still in the earth and heavens.
I yearn to dwell with my father in his kingdom. For if thou hast passed
your judgment carry mine body to the guillotine. I stand fervent and
chains shall not hold my soul. I am a child of God and in his name
I commit my execution for I will not bear your seal.

My brethren I say unto you your government has a mass number
of these devices housed within your military. My research has
concluded that the antichrist is among us. Deny not Christ but lift
up his name for salvation. The time revelationís speaks of is amongst
us. We as a people must acknowledge his truthís or burn in the lakes
of fire.


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CD (Camille) Swanson 05/24/12
Very nicely done. This was a powerful and compelling story...and delivered an important message which transcends time.

I enjoyed the dialogue, and the descriptive words in declaration and love to our Lord.

A very good job with this piece, and a beautiful way of bringing the topic to the forum.

God Bless~
Shann Hall-LochmannVanBennekom 05/26/12
This is A powerful story. I liked the courage of the MC, I'd suggest you put questions or thoughts in italics or quotation my his to help the reader know who is speaking.
Overall you did A spectacular job. You were on topic and your message is one we all need from time to time.
Theresa Santy 05/26/12
Concise, hard-hitting, & poignant.

Well done.
Jody Day 05/30/12
Compelling and nice job sticking to the theme.

We all need to brush up on our punctuation, etc. That's my only stumble on this one.

Good job!