The Official Writing Challenge
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I really enjoyed this. I wonder if it would have a greater impact had you told it in a story format and use the extra words to really paint a picture. I do think it was a genius way to show kids what it must have been like on that first Easter so long ago. Great, creative take on the topic with a nice twist in the end.
Very creative-good approach. A very interesting and powerful ending. Good job.
God Bless~
Congratulations for ranking 7th in level one!
I read your poem and I had a hard time with it. This piece is unusual too, but you have such a way with words, I'm drawn to your work. Like I said on the other piece, Im a bit slow. I would like to read more.

Connie K Cameron