The Official Writing Challenge
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12/01/11
Well said. Your poem/article is clear and to the point (as well as quite artistic in how you ordered your lines). I think it makes a good message without sounding preachy.
I like the effect that the way you wrote the poem looked on paper. I've written poems that show that contrast by adding or deleting a word a line and it isn't easy to do.

You covered the topic in a similar way that many others have. But I'll give you points for the creative way you told your message. Nicely done.
12/06/11
Very clever and well done. As it started you had me trying to figure out your strategy which actually drew me into the message.

Thanks!
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