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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Download/Upload (11/17/11)

TITLE: The Great Commission
By Kristine Baker
11/28/11


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Downloading started first from God.
On tablets were written the
Words / rules to follow, but
Nobody knew to
Listen to God.
Only Son
Arrived.
Died.

Upload
Pentecost.
Lit fire in saints.
Our hearts open to
Accept the Word of God.
Direct our upload to world.

Use everything God revealed to
Plant holy seeds in the youth so
Later they remember,
Only Jesus saves.
Away worldly
Devotion!

Decide.
Oh,
Who will
Now share Word?
Let it out and
Overflow to next
Anxiously awaiting
Dying, sinful human.

Where do you see yourself in the chain of the Great Commission? Is the Word of God being downloaded into your mind and heart? Or are you ready to upload all you have learned about God and the saving power of Jesus?

Christian, know that it is common to be in constant motion downloading and uploading the Word of God. Sow the seeds of God's Word into the young, and as they approach their own day of Pentecost, they will be ready for the Great Commission.


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Nancy Bucca 12/01/11
Well said. Your poem/article is clear and to the point (as well as quite artistic in how you ordered your lines). I think it makes a good message without sounding preachy.
Shann Hall-LochmannVanBennekom 12/01/11
I like the effect that the way you wrote the poem looked on paper. I've written poems that show that contrast by adding or deleting a word a line and it isn't easy to do.

You covered the topic in a similar way that many others have. But I'll give you points for the creative way you told your message. Nicely done.
Hiram Claudio12/06/11
Very clever and well done. As it started you had me trying to figure out your strategy which actually drew me into the message.

Thanks!
Shann Hall-LochmannVanBennekom 12/16/11
Congratulations for ranking 8th in your level!