The Official Writing Challenge
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I really feel like you've poured out your heart, here. And never fear, God is near to us, and does hear from heaven. “If my people, which are called by my name, shall humble themselves, and pray, and seek my face, and turn from their wicked ways; then will I hear from heaven, and will forgive their sin, and will heal their land.” 2 Chronicles 7:14
Who better then the greatest editor to hear your plea. I enjoyed this immensely. Thank you for a beauitful poem and God bless.
06/07/10
Very timely,and you gave voice to so many heartbroken people, especially those who are closest to this tragedy. Our God cares. Great job.
06/08/10
A modern psalm, written with heartfelt emotion.

Ironically, I thought that the middle segments that contained the metaphor of actual manuscript editing didn't really add to the impact of the poem. They seemed isolated from the parts about the water.

I share your distress about this horrible situation, and I really felt this poem.
06/09/10
"Edit this mess" has so many layers to it! Great job.