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Dear Sir:
In the beginning the waters you created - indeed you wrote the plan
For them to be bright and blue, crystal clear and clean.
Edit this mess oh God we plead.
Do you cry? Is your heart broken?
An oil spill – or not quite the case; human error – a disgrace.
Edit this mess oh God we plead.
There are misspellings; paragraphs are not well constructed.
They’ve over used some adverbs and run-on sentences abound.
Edit this mess oh God we plead.
There are no agents of action; the passive voice is spoken.
Subjects and verbs do not agree; pronouns are indefinite.
Edit this mess oh God we plead.
People cry – their livelihoods now unsure; wild life dies – natural resources are in ruins.
With semantics we cry out; if only their actions spoke louder.
Edit this mess oh God we plead.
With all due respect to our Commander in Chief, “it’s an assault,” he said.
Isn’t it more like mass murder?
Edit this mess oh God we plead.
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