The Official Writing Challenge
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02/12/10
What a neat story. God is so good, ALL the time! Very exciting, and very well written.
Your descriptions were on target-good word choices. It gave me the atmosphere, pictured it in my head.Nice.
02/16/10
I'd love to see a whale some day! Thanks for this vicarious glimpse.
02/16/10
Very descriptive; I was right there with you! Excellent grammar and writing skills as well as story idea. Great job!
02/18/10
Great descriptions! I could see the sun setting on the ocean even though I've never been there. I could feel the happy family's excitement at seeing the whale. I liked the line "our excitement was electric." Nicely written! Congratulations on third place! :D
02/18/10
Great job Lisha,congrats on your placing! See you in Level 2!