The Official Writing Challenge
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08/15/05
You have given beautiful descriptions here, and weaved in sorrow. I loved the ending. a touching story.
08/16/05
Very emotional! thanks!
08/18/05
Wow - I like the line…he fell asleep and when he awoke the trip was over.
08/18/05
Nicely written - I really liked the last line.
Really enjoyed reading this. Wasn't expecting the ending though...great job!
You have chosen your descriptions of heaven well. I suspected where the piece was going but this is something a non-Christian could read and not find threatening and yet be touched by the ending. Loved the very last line. Well done.
Wow! Congratulations...you deserve to win 1st placed! Keep up the good work...you have talent.