The Official Writing Challenge
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Sounds like you life was a bit tough, but you are certainly reaping rewards. Thanks for sharing!
How wonderful that you are able to assume the role you were meant to have--auntie! It is a testimony to your strength and faith that your sisters are in their own homes. I like that you can see that you were growing in Him as you grew up so fast. Thanks for sharing, and please keep writing.
Your story is touching and I think could be developed into something a little longer. Keep writing. The paper and pen or screen and keyboard are always good listeners.
Your writing is very lyrical. Although written in prose, it would, I think, do very well in a tightened poem as well.
I love how your article shows the emotion and love that you feel. You did a good job of allowing us to feel the way that you felt.
I, too, thought the story felt like poetry in places. Thank you for sharing such strong emotions, as you shared your story.
there were just a few spelling and grammar errors, but they did not detract from the story. Keep writing.