The Official Writing Challenge
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09/12/09
Sounds like you life was a bit tough, but you are certainly reaping rewards. Thanks for sharing!
09/12/09
How wonderful that you are able to assume the role you were meant to have--auntie! It is a testimony to your strength and faith that your sisters are in their own homes. I like that you can see that you were growing in Him as you grew up so fast. Thanks for sharing, and please keep writing.
Your story is touching and I think could be developed into something a little longer. Keep writing. The paper and pen or screen and keyboard are always good listeners.
09/15/09
Your writing is very lyrical. Although written in prose, it would, I think, do very well in a tightened poem as well.
09/16/09
I love how your article shows the emotion and love that you feel. You did a good job of allowing us to feel the way that you felt.
09/16/09
I, too, thought the story felt like poetry in places. Thank you for sharing such strong emotions, as you shared your story.
there were just a few spelling and grammar errors, but they did not detract from the story. Keep writing.