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06/16/09
I'm not very good at critiquing poetry, but wanted to let you know that this intrigued me. Is it about justification? I pictured dirty rags - sin - being left behind. I'll be thinking about it for a while.
06/16/09
This is definitely one that makes a person think. I'm not sure it's on topic, but a very interesting poem. I like the reference to letting the waste be washed down the river and gaining new ways of living.
06/18/09
Fabulous! I love the image of washing her worn old heavy clothing, then having the river take it away all together. Congrats on your well deserved 3rd place!
06/19/09
Hi Susan. Congratulations on your 3rd place win in Level 1. The competition is always intense in Level 1, so you did very well. Time to move up to Level 2 now (starting with the new topic on 2nd July).

Hope to see you at the FaithWriters' Conference in August. It’s going to be an amazing time of inspiration, information and encouragement.
http://www.faithwriters.com/conference.php

With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)