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06/11/09
Sounds like real life to me and it sounds like someone wrote this who is real close to this situation. Although it is heartbreaking to realize that our children are living this way, I liked the article very much. I got it loud and clear. Thanks for sharing this.
06/14/09
What a great reminder to really intentionally love our youth of today. As you mentioned, some of them certainly get the short stick. And if we don't love them now, our future will be bleak indeed. Good job!
Thanks for your article. As a teacher, I also see the students who have little to go home for. They are so hungry for love, and they seek it out in such harmful ways!

Are you a teacher, too?
06/17/09
A timely and heartfelt essay.
06/18/09
Good subject material and I could see your passion.

Maybe a suggestion...write about you, how this affects you, what you feel, etc. instead of about THEM.

You have a very clean writing style.
Mona