The Official Writing Challenge
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12/05/08
Beautiful! Wait, I'll say it again--really, really beautiful! I can't wait to find out who wrote this! It's beautiful!
01/05/09
Steve, I read this one aloud. It's beauty stunned me, and I wept inside for that need we all have. The time to get away, to reflect, to worship, to see again, and then go back to the bad/good. LOVED this. Really loved this.
I can think of no better summation of this piece than what you wrote here: 'Emmanuel, God with us—with me and within me." I say this only because to be able to see and reveal this beauty to the reader, God must truly be within the author. You spoke of many universal things - if someone missed understanding them, it is their loss, not yours.