The Official Writing Challenge
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10/18/08
This is a good reminder that not everyone has a happy Christmas.
Beautifully written. I felt your compassion for all who have lost a loved one.
10/20/08
Very well done - you took us with you into the emotions and the healing - I'd like to adopt those kids! Real and touching.
This is a touching tale. I enjoyed your telling of it, however I think you could improve it with better paragraph divisions and more careful placement of commas. I'd like to read more about the kids. Keep up the great work!
This is a touching story of grief and moving on. I felt drawn to this family. Nicely done.
Bittersweet, and very touching.
10/23/08
Hi Norms,

Congratulations on your placement.I really enjoyed this story. It is nice to see you getting back into the swing of things. Love to you, Dave and the family,
Ken.