The Official Writing Challenge
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10/16/08
My heart ached for Cheryl trying to deal with the changes in her life, very difficult and confusing in a child's life. So, happy the story ends on a positive new beginning with Christ as the center. And the scripture reference is perfect. Excellent job!
10/17/08
You did a good job showing a child's confusion when the people they look to for truth change their beliefs.