The Official Writing Challenge
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09/19/08
This is fun. Watch your punctuation though, okay. I've found contest judges to be sticklers on that sort of thing. Loved your descriptions of the elderly man in the story. I could really picture him in my head. Thanks.
What a twist! At first, I was confused as to how he could regenerate, but as I continued reading it was ....aha!
09/20/08
Very clever twist, and super descriptions. I was engaged throughout.