The Official Writing Challenge
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The discriptive writing is excellent and what a message! You won't be in Level I for long.
This was good! Had me on the edge of my seat, wondering how it was going to finish. Very good descriptions!
Incredible descriptions and imagery. I agree--you are clearly more than a "beginner". Excellent.
Excellent! I really like this. You drew me right in to this story, and I love the way it ends. I agree that I think you will be moving on up soon. God Bless!
Wonderful piece and good question @ the end.
Ooooh, this was so good, I only wish I actully knew how to play chess, lol. Very well written!
Only the Master can play this game of chess. You've painted that picture well.
Very impressive writing. Loved it from beginning to end.