The Official Writing Challenge
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The discriptive writing is excellent and what a message! You won't be in Level I for long.
This was good! Had me on the edge of my seat, wondering how it was going to finish. Very good descriptions!
09/20/08
Incredible descriptions and imagery. I agree--you are clearly more than a "beginner". Excellent.
09/24/08
Excellent! I really like this. You drew me right in to this story, and I love the way it ends. I agree that I think you will be moving on up soon. God Bless!
09/24/08
Wonderful piece and good question @ the end.
09/24/08
Ooooh, this was so good, I only wish I actully knew how to play chess, lol. Very well written!
Only the Master can play this game of chess. You've painted that picture well.
09/24/08
Very impressive writing. Loved it from beginning to end.