The Official Writing Challenge
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I enjoyed the analogy used in the poem and the message is wonderful. Very good job with the topic.
09/19/08
Good message. I am not sure that God has any "angles" though! That is not something a spell check would have picked up. Some of your rhyming couplets were spot on in terms of the rythmn and end rhymes. There were others where I felt you had too many syllables.
09/20/08
Good work with your rhyming. The rhythm was a little off in places. Good thoughts.