The Official Writing Challenge
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I think its time for you to move up a level. I'd like to see something really creative-something that challenges your imagination. Go for it!
07/11/05
I liked the way that you made your presentation very clear. It's not often that we would see that someone would take responsibility and chastisement of God upon themselves for being disobedient to the will of the Lord. And the outcome of the repentent soul (minister). God bless ya,
littlelight
07/12/05
I enjoyed reading this. Nice use of scripture.
Creative take on the beach topic. Putting an extra space between each paragraph would help divide thoughts. Good job!
07/13/05
I love the contrast between shaking the dust off his shoes in the beginning in anger, and shaking the sand out of his shoes in obedience at the end. Well done!
A very interesting use of scripture for the topic. Your entry was well presented. Thanks for sharing.
07/14/05
A very good tight article, thanks for sharing.
07/14/05
Very well done. Nice writing. (seems higher level than beginners though :0) Go for it!
07/15/05
Good job. I enjoyed the spin on the beach. I too believe that you could move up a level. Enjoyed your article.
Anger to obedience - thought-provoking and compelling.
i am new to this but i enjoyed , second chance very much.