The Official Writing Challenge
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There is so much here. Pain and joy, and finally hope.
06/07/08
Well done! I like how you showed your different homes as you grew.
It's will be wonderful to be in our heavenly home.
Well written
06/09/08
This was great writing. I could feel the hurt and longing and searching of this woman. You developed your story gradually, leading up to our heavenly home....Well done. Were I a judge, I would give you high marks....In my opinion, you will soon move up to the next level...Helen