The Official Writing Challenge
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Good story idea. Use your alloted word count to expand some- perhaps, have Grandpa explain how he came to know some of these workers so personally. :)
03/04/08
Ah, "Fat Day!" Maybe that could be a recognized day of the week! I can just smell those fries...

All joking aside, I love that you shared this idea about knowing the people we come in contact with on a regular basis. Definitely consider expanding this, but you did manage to show how his actions meant a whole lot more than just words, even without the extra details.
03/04/08
Wonderful story. I like to try to bring a smile to service people too. And now I'm hungry for french fries! LOL Great writing - keep up the great work! God bless! :)
03/06/08
great example of truly living Christ in this world.