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I thought your story was well written and it made me think of my granny! great job
My grandfather was my favorite relative because he loved me for me...period. You've captured the essence of unconditional love that grandparents often give. Try splitting up sentences where there may be too many ideas hooked together, like: "Grandma was my entertainment, as we had no transportation, and she tried to teach me how to play cards, sew and cook; but none of these were my gifts." Thank God for grandmas!
09/08/07
Times are so difficult in every era. You brought to mind how resilient we need to be. Good job.
Wow! What a testimony to what one person can do in another's life!
Just goes to show we never know the influence we can be to those around us.
GOD is so good and knows that many of us would be lost without the boldness of people like your Grandma.