The Official Writing Challenge
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05/10/05
Your mother gave you a great legacy as seen in your words about her. I think it would have flowed better had you separated it by paragraphs.
I agree reading it would have been better in paragraphs.

I loved the memories listed here. You showed a woman who had borne it all and still managed to leave you with an understanding of God's love and what unconditional love meant. I could almost see her in your words
05/12/05
Your mother gave you the promise of God. Her compassion, even through her pain and loss, shines through.