The Official Writing Challenge
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05/10/05
You had good thoughts there, but needs more developing. Remember, to look over your work and do the spell check and grammar tools. Keep
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05/11/05
There is a lot of truth in what you've written. God has truly blessed women in giving them such an awesome role.
07/17/05
Amen, These are the type of experiences that many will not shortly forget. I believe you could develope this short story a little further with a few additions. Good and bright thoughts, I enjoyed. God bless ya, littlelight