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TRUST JESUS TODAY
I was going through a time when I was feeling distant from God. This is my cry to Him. Do you relate to the feeling of just not being in touch with the Lord? Are there any structural errors in this poem?
Today Iím walking down this road and Iím feeling all alone.
I know You havenít left me on my own
But Iím feeling lonely for reasons unknown.
I donít know exactly whatís wrong,
but Iím feeling distant from You
and Iím standing here not knowing what I should do.
I canít go without You even one day!
Lord, I need You to wrap Your arms around me
And tell me every thing's okay.
Donít leave me hanging here wondering if itís something Iíve done.
Lord, please donít hold back from me Your love.
If thereís something that needs to change,
Make it known to me so I can ask Your forgiveness
And feel safe again within Your security.
Lord, I need You here with me now.
I canít live my life without You,
I need You to show me what I should do and tell me how.
There are so many things calling out to me.
I need Your guidance to show me where I should be.
Your Presence is the one thing I canít live without even a single day.
Please let me feel You with me now as I pray.
Lord, allow me to feel Your loving arms around me.
Bring me back to the place where Your face is all I see.
If thereís something Iíve missed
I ask that You show it to me.
Please keep me from making a mess out of everything Youíve given to me.
Lord, Iím calling out to You again!
Iím on my knees begging You to save me from this empty feeling within.
I know You havenít left me on my own.
And I believe Youíre standing right here next to me.
Yet, I feel so alone, and I canít wait to get home
Because this life makes it so hard
To stay where You are.
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