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To Fill a Tear
by Pat Guy 
03/15/08
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Her cries went unheard in the closet permeated with urine. She knew better. Her stomach ached with the only words she knew, “Jesus loves me.”


Pat Guy

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Seema Bagai  21 Mar 2008
Vivid and sad. Pat, do you need a hug?
Tim Pickl 15 Mar 2008
ohhh...how heartbreaking. Wow.
Gerald Shuler  15 Mar 2008
Isn't it amazing how much story can be told in just a few words. I read this one and immediately so a woman twenty years later trying to cope with raising a child when all she can remember is her own horrible childhood. Masterfully written.
Beth LaBuff  15 Mar 2008
a nightmarish reality for some... it's so sad... excellent writing Pat!
Janice Cartwright 15 Mar 2008
It really is amazing how many of these micro-stories seem so movie-like. This is really good, Pat.




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