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The last line is the most poignant one of all. The poem reminds me of a song I heard yesterday "It Makes Me Want to Shout Hallelujah." You have presented so clearly what can be seen in us before Jesus erases all our sins, and how wonderful it is when he cleanses us and presents us forgiven before Him. Thank you for this wonderful reminder you presented so beautifully.
10/17/19
Beautiful!
10/18/19
I love the contrast between the two mirrors. It is spot on.
10/18/19
I'm really glad God sees his version of me, rather than what I see! Well done expressing that reality.
10/20/19
Ingenious piece that makes one think.

Good message,
Blessings
10/21/19
What a lovely message in this poem. And I like how you used the topic in more than one way.
This is a brilliant piece. It shows the message of God's love for us in such a clear way. Its message is one I really need this week too.
10/24/19
Where would we be without grace? Great flow.
Congratulations on ranking 13th overall. Happy Dance!