The Official Writing Challenge
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This is great. I've had 4 kidney stones and you do an awesome job of explaining the pain that is unlike any other I've experienced. It's definitely a miserable time. I liked your fresh take on the topic and how you showed love and support from a great family can be the best medicine ever.
05/17/19
Oh, I really could feel your pain in these descriptions. Well done!
Ouch! I've never had a kidney stone, but I'm glad. You made the pain very real. I like the ending when you speak of being home with your husband again. Things are always better at home.
First, I had to look up "Execrable" in the dictionary because it's a new word to me. :-) But then as I began to read, I knew you'd chosen the right title. Like many others, I've had some unwelcome stones in my body and they were exactly as you describe. I gave a big sigh of relief when I learned the outcome of your well-written piece!
Congratulations on ranking 12 overall. Happy Dance!